Monday, February 22, 2010

She who clearly cannot leave well enough alone...



I decided I didn't like the cereal in Version 1/Plan B. It was a Kashi cereal, but looked like _____? I'm not sure what it looked like exactly, but not exactly like cereal. So I put in more milk, and a few Cherrios.The cereal reads better, but the overall composition is a bit BLAH to me. Oh, well. Must quit sometime. And it may as well be now. No promises, though. I may come up with a better fix before the night is over. But then it will have to have the rest of the week to dry.

5 comments:

Julia Kelly said...

Sorry you are having such trials! I can relate- yes walk away- it looked good, still looks good and will be a nice addition to the show!

J. Austin - said...

Hehe, that's funny, I have to confess I was wondering WHAT kind of cereal it was! And I eat Kashi, but I didn't recognize it. Not that that was a problem for me.....but I do think I like the cheerios better. And they are like tiny life preservers, very relevant don't you think?

Tommye McClure Scanlin said...

This looks excellent, Kathy.

Jennifer said...

Oh - yes - waiting for it to feel right! I think it's wonderful.

Owlfarmer said...

I love the second version. Kashi's probably better for you, but Cheerios are, well, cheery in their own way--but also better "designed." Less sometimes really is more.